I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Thursday, 20 June 2013

Writing Sample

Characters: Jake, Tony and Ben.

Where: A small village called Danville   
The problem that things start to disappear.
An evil villain starts taking things with a machine.
The problem is solved by Jake, Tony and Ben.


The Take A Na-tor


It was a beautiful sunny morning is Danville. There were people mowing their lawns, having a cup of coffee with friends but it was different for Tony, Ben and Jake , they were playing video games on their Xbox. They were having so much fun, but then suddenly the Xbox disappeared so did the TV.

“What just happened, where's the Xbox and the TV?”, said Jake.

“I’m scared”, said Ben.

“Oh, don’t be a little cry baby”, said Tony.

Even more things started to disappear.




“OK, that's it, we have to put a stop to this because if we don’t everything in the whole village might disappear, who's with me?”, said Jake.

“Don’t worry, I’ll help you”, said Ben.

“I'm with you mate”, said Tony

So Ben, Jake and Tony are off on a mission to find out why things are disappearing.



“I know what we can do, we will go outside and see if anything is gone”, said Ben.

“Ok, let’s do this”, said Jake.

The boys went outside to see if anything was missing. There was, lampposts, park bench and there were a whole lot of other stuff that were missing too.



“I think it’s an evil villain with machine called the Take A Na-tor”, said Tony.

“I think so too”, said Ben.

"I think you guys are right", said Jake.


They went searching for an evil villain who had a machine and they found the evil villain who had a machine called The Take A Na-tor. So Ben was right.

The End

Thursday, 13 June 2013

100 Word Challenge

The Zoo Keepers Night Shift




The zoo closed. All of the animals were all sleeping. BOOM, but then, all of the animals woke up from a loud noise, even the zoo keeper herd it. The zoo keeper called the police and they came to the zoo in about ten minutes. The animals went so crazy you couldn't even hear the zoo keeper talk to the police. The police went around the whole zoo, he saw someone behind a bush with a device making all these loud noises. 

The police asked him a few questions and then the cop took him over to the zoo keeper and the police told him everything the person told the cop.

All the animals went back to sleep, all the problems were sorted and everything went back to normal.

Wednesday, 5 June 2013

Cross Courtney Recount

It was a cold sunny day in Wellington, but there's time to talk about the weather because I here to tell you about Cross Courtney. We were all inside the all nervous about this whole running thing. We went out in our year groups, year 7 girls, year 7 boys, year 8 girls and then the year 8 boys. The year 7 girls went out first, I got to nervous when they got called out because I was next. The girls warmed up and they went off. Year 7 boys got called outside, we all warmed up really hard then we lined up getting ready to run. We were off running a block run then up a steep hill were I fell over but I was back up running on my feet. We ran underneath the bridge and we were almost to the collage field. Finally I was at the top field sprinting down the underneath the tunnel. I'm almost at the finish line saying to myself.Finally I was at the finish line coming 83rd place. I did my best I could, finally it's over.

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